As we approach the Hudson-Champlain observances in 2009, there is a question of historians' writing style that has me intrigued.  I find myself slightly annoyed when I read a phrase that seems to me trite and hackneyed in otherwise good historical writing.  Am I being oversensitive, or is this a valid gripe?  The phrase is this:  In 1609 Hudson/Champlain "explored the river/lake which bears his name."  This gets written in this way over and over.  Shouldn't this worn-out, stale phrase be avoided by good writers?  I guess once one begins to notice it, the more annoying it gets.
 
Paul Huey




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